Task Description: This weeks writing we've got two different sets of writing and today I've got the first one ready to share with you all. This writing is called a six sentence writing and what we had to do was writing about something only using 6 sentences. If you are interested in checking it out you should see for yourself.
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ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Deborah nice writing there. Just wanted to say good writing,but I think you went a bit to over with your writing, but the rest is all good.Just remember to put some commas in your writing and then your writing will be BETTER.By Zoe.
ReplyDeleteHey Zoe, thank you for the helpful comment! I may have added a bit more then I was supposed to. But at least I have someone that has good advice for next time!
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Malo Deborah, thanks for sharing your 6 sentence story here. I can see that you've decided to add onto these 6 sentences. Just an idea, to help your viewers see this writing more clearer - copy and paste it to also sit under your google slides. I love how Trinity in your story ends up helping others by the end of this piece. I think more people will interact it with it more easily. Well done Deborah!
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs Tele'a, Okay I may have added to much! But thank you for stopping by and commenting. This task was really good to boost my writing skills, THANK YOU!
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