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Friday 23 August 2019

Word of the week !!

If I was in a chocolate for 24 hours

If I was In a chocolate Factory 
                For 24 hour
If I was in a chocolate factory for 24 hours I think the first thing I would do Is run to the chocolate. I would go around the whole factory and try to find the biggest bowl I can find in their. After I find a bowl I’m going to try and find as many chocolates in the factory. Im first going to poor some chocolate into the bowl and then add some hard chocolates to makes it more fun and better. And then I eat it and have a chocolate party. After that I’m going to try and make my own chocolate using the chocolate machine. I might add some caramel to spice it up, Ow and some sprinkles and….. More chocolate. Chocolate is my favorite flavor so this is going to be good. After making thousands of chocolate I’m going to pack them into boxes and give them out to kids and families. Because I can’t eat them all, Like whaaat. Prombly after eating all that chocolate I’m going to be really hyped. But luckily I bring some entertainment that could worn me out when I go to sleep. I brang a trampoline, jump rope, and more. But let's not worry about that right now let’s just have some fun and make the most of it. I bet you that in the morning I would feel so sick and spuow, so I brought a bucket just in case. But any way that what would do in a chocolate factory for 24 hours.

Friday 9 August 2019

Show not tell My old sneakers time for new ones

 

Hideous shoes need to flee away Immediately, before it gets any disturbing when people glance at it. Dirty whitish patches all over it. Colour fading away slowly creating a colour of a swamp with little organisms inside. Attached with a horrific smell making it dreadful to get use to. Stains looking like rotten patches. Very Shocking to just glance it for at least a second. Remarkable leather slowly wiping out of the terrific shoes. After purchasing some brand new sneakers the old sneakers off to the garbage.

Show not tell rainy day



On a grey cloudy day, It was pouring with rain. The Rain drops covering the windows making it to blurry to see. Icy winds blowing against the trees, making the leaves fall on the muddy puddles. The temperature outside had almost felt like it was snowing. All you could hear is the trees whistling against the windows. Cold wind trying to get in the house, but got trapped by the enormous windows. Rain pouring every second not even thinking of stopping. Not a single car passing by on the road. Not even a single bird been seen. All of a sudden a vast of wind blow off an enormous brunch from the tree, A sudden movement from the tree, making a  cracking sound.          






Show not tell the beach



On a clear blue bright day. I was heading towards the beach, walking in the direction of the path way. Looking out at the beautiful shores of the islands. Trees leaning across the soft sand and creating a shade covering the sun. water almost as if it is the water we drink. Tropical breeze blowing through your hair. As if it was a large fan right in front of you but instead of those tough breezes from the fan its smother and refreshing breezes. Gazing towards the beautiful islands across the shores. Glancing up and seeing birds roaming around the sky. Water rushing in towards your feet taking a bit of sand as well. Looking out in the shores I noticed a Blue and white boat passing by with lots of people inside. After the boat passing by my eyesight caught a little red creature right under the palm tree. As I walked closer and closer I just noticed it was a little baby crab. Once it saw me it sprinted away and disappeared into the green lush bushes. The sound of the water flowing up and down the sand.

Finding fractions of numbers